Script Workshop! (??)

ChrisTrew.Com · Post by **ChrisTrew.Com** » January 26th, 2006, 2:40 pm

Soooooooo, here's my deal.
Back in 2004 I wrote a large chunk of a screenplay called "Best Men."
I took my first big break from it when I started doing improv later that year. Improv took over that part of my brain and then in early 2005 I went back to it, enlisting the help of many improv friends. They helped me workshop it, etc., and I was in the finishing stages. Then a Hurricane came and knocked me to Austin.

Soooooooo, I need to re-associate myself with it, get back into it, so I can wrap it up, put it in my finished pile and start work on the next one.

I'm looking for:
- A few people who want to read it and give me some feedback. (Note: I love harsh feedback. I need it. Don't be nice to me.) I will give you a copy and a big black marker.

or

- Some people who want to sit around a table with a copy of it and read the entire thing (110 pages) out loud while jotting down notes to themselves in little notebooks with little pens that will be provided while I listen (for the first time) how these words sound coming from mouths and not my head.

or

- Anyone who has done this before to give me one last slap in the formatting face to make sure everything is tidy.

or

- Anything else that you can think of. I'm free most days.

Thank you for reading this. PM me if you're interested.

Wesley · Post by **Wesley** » January 26th, 2006, 3:09 pm

I'd love to read a copy, but I prefer marking in red. It's the editor in me.

kbadr · Post by **kbadr** » January 26th, 2006, 3:32 pm

*cough* The Cult Script Workshop *cough*

Evilpandabear · Post by **Evilpandabear** » January 26th, 2006, 3:37 pm

i'm a better script editor than a writer so i'd love to crush all your hopes and dreams

Roy Janik · Post by **Roy Janik** » January 27th, 2006, 10:19 am

I'd be happy to take a look-see and help out where I can.

ChrisTrew.Com · Post by **ChrisTrew.Com** » January 27th, 2006, 4:09 pm

Does anyone have Final Draft? I could email it to anyone who just wants to read it. Info on table reading coming soon.

HerrHerr · Post by **HerrHerr** » January 27th, 2006, 5:00 pm

I have final draft, and about five features written myself. You can send it to me...and I'll try to read it at some point, though my schedule is so busy...but I will try if you like.

--peace

ChrisTrew.Com · Post by **ChrisTrew.Com** » January 29th, 2006, 11:06 pm

Whoa whoa whoa:
Here is a copy online-
http://studio8.net/Terp/BestMen.pdf

I'd like to again note- nice things are nice, but I'm not really interested in that. Tell me mean, awful things. If you're up for it.

Thanks!