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happywaffle wrote:Correct, I define "thread" as "character motivation" in this case. Audie, Jesse, and Cassandra are (last we checked) all in the same place, and (not to plan ahead too much) all have a certain motivation to get to San Francisco.
EDIT: Or maybe not. It's unclear as of yet why Jesse delivered to Cassandra her father's hand, or how he came into possession of it in the first place.
Rev. Jordan T. Maxwell wrote:i intended the last chapter to take place in Cleary's office (the room chapter 44 took place in), not Brettsdick's. i realized i left it vague and added a few words to clarify.
(not a huge difference, but i figure after five days someone would look for Brettsdick in his own office, whereas not many would be brave enough to enter Cleary's, if they even knew where it was. so makes his plight a bit more dire.)
happywaffle wrote:Rev. Jordan T. Maxwell wrote:i intended the last chapter to take place in Cleary's office (the room chapter 44 took place in), not Brettsdick's. i realized i left it vague and added a few words to clarify.
(not a huge difference, but i figure after five days someone would look for Brettsdick in his own office, whereas not many would be brave enough to enter Cleary's, if they even knew where it was. so makes his plight a bit more dire.)
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